Re: English Chat Season 9

by **Panda-san** Sat Jun 16, 2012 12:57 pm

ah... no... I'm not that great <img src="http://benjamin0331.googlepages.com/kiss.png" style="border:0; margin:0; padding:0;" id="new" /> yaa:

by **Michalv** Sat Jun 16, 2012 1:23 pm

You're heavy sleeper Onion Head Emoticons

by **Panda-san** Sat Jun 16, 2012 1:30 pm

ufu~
of course!!!
sleeping is the best!!!! XDDD

by **Gwilthyunman** Sat Jun 16, 2012 1:30 pm

Mom is not sleeping anymore, but hibernating...

by **Panda-san** Sat Jun 16, 2012 1:36 pm

holidays are meant to be a time when we can hibernate!
after all the depressing stuff @ school ;A;

by **Michalv** Sat Jun 16, 2012 1:40 pm

Dont forget to TL ability shop mom ==

by **Gwilthyunman** Sat Jun 16, 2012 4:30 pm

You should bombard her via facebook, mich! Or since you know her in real life, just bombard her by phone and sms XD

by **Panda-san** Sat Jun 16, 2012 4:47 pm

oh no!!!!
argh these sfx are killing me
akjghlkbralkghbb
Nightmare

by **Michalv** Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:15 pm

I think this might help you mom :D

English Chat Season 9 - Page 20 Spongebob-imagination-1a0uyxv

by **vinaru** Sat Jun 16, 2012 8:46 pm

oik!
long time no see all!

~~*do you know how I miss you all while I was doing my english exam?*~~

by **Panda-san** Sat Jun 16, 2012 9:21 pm

you missed us?!
I'm so moved!! Crying Bunny

by **Michalv** Sat Jun 16, 2012 9:31 pm

@Vi: WELCOME BAAACK~
Please do KHR nao XD

by **Anna-Mary** Sun Jun 17, 2012 6:13 pm

Mommy showed up??? In who's sake??? (Demi apa??)

Uhm, by the way, please, PLEASE give me comments about this... I know, it's not good, I cannot do gfx, but please comment. Nicely please. #bang
This is the newspaper design I made for a competition in my town.

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by **EX-7** Sun Jun 17, 2012 6:47 pm

good, nice, beautiful!! You should add miku there~ Onion Head Emoticons

by **Anna-Mary** Sun Jun 17, 2012 6:50 pm

Please, give me more serious comment, or constructive. Because I'm so sickly worried if it doesn't make sense. :x

by **Panda-san** Sun Jun 17, 2012 7:30 pm

I think it doesn't need to be stroked :/
newspaper usually don't stroke anything... I guess (I rarely read newspaper although I'm in the journalistic extracurricular Razz

)
and the bg is "berat sebelah"? :/
The white space feels so empty

by **Anna-Mary** Sun Jun 17, 2012 7:33 pm

Yeah, but if no strokes, it's hard to read :-/ I was in dilemma, argh.
....Oh RIGHT! I even put the news with photos on that one side only! Gotta revise it.

Another comment, before I make revision...? *kitty eyes* (no, not puppy eyes, imagine the eyes of Puss in Boots)

by **Panda-san** Sun Jun 17, 2012 7:42 pm

and the text should be in columns to make it more newspaper-ish?
and the photos are usually in the center
maybe like this:

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or move it upward so its like:

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by **Anna-Mary** Sun Jun 17, 2012 7:53 pm

Yes, because in smaller columns it's easier to read ("jangkauan mata nggak terlalu lebar")

Umm, that's what I'm trying to make with the headline's photo (it's in center) though it seems fail effort lol.

And I know, that tree doesn't really fit in with the theme (recycled paper).

By the way, do you think the font size is good? I'm not sure what size they use in newspaper :-/

by **Panda-san** Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:07 pm

maybe you should use these kind of pic:

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and the j-crew part....
"bolong gimana gitu" :/

by **Anna-Mary** Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:13 pm

Uhh, but where should I put it? :x

Oh, that one, the space is meant for our photo. Hehehe.

by **Panda-san** Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:19 pm

recycle thingy pic for the bg :/
OH~
I think you're going to leave it empty like that XD

by **Anna-Mary** Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:58 pm

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or

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??

Has it become any better?
Oh, and don't mind the break lines, please. I just forgot to revise it...

by **Panda-san** Sun Jun 17, 2012 9:01 pm

if the bg is in the middle it'll be more balanced... I think...
or maybe add recycled paper texture on it? (feels more like magazine than a newspaper, though :/)

by **Anna-Mary** Sun Jun 17, 2012 9:04 pm

....wait, did I upload the same file TWICE??
Bloody hell, my mind's gone wiry.

this is the one at center.

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Yeah, it becomes too much like magazine, not newspaper... I'm so tooooorn inbetween!

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