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Post by yuuki-hime on Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:58 am

Wah udh bagus, banyak berkembang Wink
cuma, pemotongan kata dikit sih msh harus diperbaiki.
Sama pg. 1 panel 3 dan pg. 2 panel 4 kecil banget sizenya
dan kurang ketengah beberapa tp dikit kok~
Ganbatte eru Music Tuzki Bakalan lulus nih Onion Head Emoticons
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Post by TheHangedMan on Wed Feb 16, 2011 1:02 pm

ya, makin bagus nih Smile
nambahin komentar yuuki:
1. Redrawnya masih keliatan(halaman 2, panel 4). tapi gapapa lah
2. Halaman terakhir, panel 3. Teksnya dibikin horizontal, jangan vertikal.
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Post by Gwilthyunman on Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:26 pm

eRu, makin bagus TS kamu, cuman ga KONSISTEN!
Fatal mistake:
- Pic. 3, kok teks diluar bubble ga pake Italic Question Kan itu thought... teks didalam bubble kok kamu Italic Question Itukan percakapan biasa...
- Pic 2, panel 4, klo pas redraw, garis2nya jangan kamu ilangin, klo kamu ilangin, hasilnya bakal jelek spt punyamu, coba deh kamu imajinasiin gambnya musti gimana...

Oh ya, pic 1 bubble trakhir, kamu pake font apa ya Question

Percobaan pertama (pdhl aku yg milih testnya, tp blm nyoba sm skali) Razz dan emang redrawnya ssh Razz aku aja ga bisa Razz
pic 1:
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Pic 2:
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Post by Anna-Mary on Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:31 pm

Page 1: bubble terakhir kayaknya kurang tengah Razz
Page 2: panel terakhir bubble satu juga kurang tengah Razz
Page 3: Insert text satu, Mana huruf kapitalnya??? *mata laser*

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Post by Gwilthyunman on Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:42 pm

Anna-Mary wrote:Page 1: bubble terakhir kayaknya kurang tengah Razz
affraid Oh ya Question Kurang apa Question Kayany udah tengah deh... scratch
Anna-Mary wrote:Page 2: panel terakhir bubble satu juga kurang tengah Razz
Okay, kurang keatas dikit silent
Anna-Mary wrote:Page 3: Insert text satu, Mana huruf kapitalnya??? *mata laser*
Errr... di TL-nya juga ga ada kapital Razz

Oh well, redrawku udah oke Question Bagus dah klo gt XD

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Post by Michalv on Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:52 pm

Ya ampun.. ann calon pemilik eagle eyes yg bru juga ~
Redraw sih mnrt ku oke2 aja
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Post by Anna-Mary on Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:08 pm

@gwilth: TS itu jangan asal copas aja, diperhatikan juga EYD.nya! Razz

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Post by yuuki-hime on Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:16 pm

lol no comment buat ini deh Onion Head Emoticons
bisa madesu saya komenin gwilth
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Post by Michaeru on Wed Feb 16, 2011 7:45 pm

Huahhh salah pengertian aku ,... Maaf Typesetter Test - Page 4 3841
@gwilth _ ia masi bnyak yg fatal ,.. hohoho aku kan belajar lagi deh redraw na ,.... en font d page buble trakhir ... apa yaa Question maaf aku jg lupa ,.. entr mu liat lagi dehh ,...
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Post by Gwilthyunman on Thu Feb 17, 2011 6:10 am

eRu, kamu jangan pake font yang lain dulu dah, pake font Wild Words aja dulu, kalo hasil typesettingmu ud bagus, baru cb ganti2 font Wink

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Post by mosaicguard on Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:04 am

gini aj, jgn terlalu fokus di redraw, klo TS mending fokus pemotongan kata, penempatan, n pemilihan font..gtu aj deh...cz TS g slalu dkasi redraw...
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Post by thevile on Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:58 pm

ikutan tes jg ah...
ni hasil tes saya...
mohon d koreksi Typesetter Test - Page 4 3841
tp bru 1 halaman...

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Post by Gwilthyunman on Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:41 pm

thevile, font utk diluar bubble (pikiran) pake Wild Words Italic, utk percakapan biasa pakai Wild Words Roman. Terus, font size kebesaran, ini ngebuat bentuk jadi jelek dan teks terlalu dekat dengan garis bubble~~

Baca tutorialnya dulu~~

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Post by Anna-Mary on Thu Feb 17, 2011 6:00 pm

Selain yg dibilang Gwilth, pemotongan kalimat juga kurang bagus.
Yg panel keempat, teks kurang turun tuh Wink

Coba lagi ya~

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Post by thevile on Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:26 pm

Gwilthyunman wrote:thevile, font utk diluar bubble (pikiran) pake Wild Words Italic, utk percakapan biasa pakai Wild Words Roman. Terus, font size kebesaran, ini ngebuat bentuk jadi jelek dan teks terlalu dekat dengan garis bubble~~

Baca tutorialnya dulu~~

waduh...bnyak salahnya ternyata.. Typesetter Test - Page 4 96420
iya gwilth.. ngerjainnya jg sambil clean!
musti bnyak bljar lg

Selain yg dibilang Gwilth, pemotongan kalimat juga kurang bagus.
Yg panel keempat, teks kurang turun tuh Wink

makasih koreksinya ann
mank musti bnyak bljar nich jd TS Typesetter Test - Page 4 423335
trnyata tgas TS berat jg... mank biasanya ukuran fontnya brpa ann??

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Post by Gwilthyunman on Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:27 pm

Ukuran font itu tergantung besar kecilnya bubble, kalo bubble besar, font juga besar, bubble kecil, font ya kecil, kalo mau lbh jelas, baca Typesetting Tutorial Wink

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Post by Michaeru on Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:23 am

Maav ya baru bisaa post,, Typesetter Test - Page 4 3841

page 1

Spoiler:
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page 2

Spoiler:
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page 3

Spoiler:
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baru bisa ngerjain td subuh ,, akhirna selesai jg ,... Typesetter Test - Page 4 187856
masi lom bisa sebaik master Typesetter Test - Page 4 965805 mohon kritik na lagi eaa ,.... Surprised
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Post by TheHangedMan on Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:56 am

Redrawmu makin bagus, Eru Wink
Tapi kenapa halaman 2 jadi Roman semua? Itu kan bubble teriak, jadi seharusnya pakai Bold Italic. Dan hati2 di halaman 3, ada bekas tulisan di redrawnya. Sisanya paling kurang tengah dan pemenggalan kurang bener(yang akan kuserahkan ke yang lain XD)
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Post by Michaeru on Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:21 am

@ THM _ huahhhhh yg d page 2 yaa ,.. salah pngertian lagi ,.. Sad
mksd na mu ngikutin saran snse gwilth,, tp yg d mksd ternyata itu buat page 3 ,.. (maav ya gwilth) Typesetter Test - Page 4 3841
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Post by Anna-Mary on Fri Feb 18, 2011 12:38 pm

yang page 1, kok teks dalam bubble.nya kayak nggak sama gitu ya.... Ada yg lebar, ada yg pipih. Kok gitu? Make font apa?

Selain itu, pemotongan kalimat yg masih harus diperbaiki.... Usahakan bentuknya rata gitu.

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Post by Psych* on Sat Feb 26, 2011 2:14 pm

aku mau nyoba typeset dooonk.. hoho XD

Test 1:
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Test 2:
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Test 3:
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mohon kritikan dan sarannya yaa.. Typesetter Test - Page 4 3841
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Post by Michalv on Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:23 pm

waaa upload ulang donk psych ~ jgn pake imageshack D:

EDIT - Aku udah upload ulang pake servimg
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Post by Gwilthyunman on Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:43 pm

My comment:
Test 1
- Panel terakhir bubble 1, kurang tengah, kurang ke bawah dikit
- Font sizenya tolong diperkecil sedikit

Test 2
- Panel 1 bubble 2, kurang ke bawah
- Teks di bubble 5 panel 1 nyentuh sama garis bubble 6, usahin jangan nyentuh
- Pemotongan kata di bubble 6 panel 1 tolong diperbagus
- Panel 2 bubble terakhir, kurang ke kanan dikit
- Redrawmu di panel 3 udah oke, tapi redraw di panel 4 jelek, garis2nya jangan kamu ilangin, tapi coba redraw ulang
- Font untuk panel 5 seharusnya Wild Words BoldItalic
- Panel 6 bubble 1, teks kurang ke bawah

Test 3
- Redraw di panel 3 sih sebenrnya udah bagus, cuma tolong diperhatikan lebih detail, masa kabel antenanya patah2 gt

Overall sih udah bagus, cuman kadang font sizemu kegedean. Kalau masalah redraw di Test 2, emank susah, makanya banyak latihan redraw.

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Post by AB Junior on Thu Mar 03, 2011 10:36 am

@all : ab mo nyoba bljr TS...
untung aj clean hokennya msh ada..:
page1
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page 2
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page3
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klo banyak kesalahan harap maklum ya... ab msh bljr TS
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Post by Anna-Mary on Thu Mar 03, 2011 10:09 pm

saya cuma liat sekilas sih, dan menurut saya udah lumayan.
Cuma di page terakhir, panel tengah, kok bubble 'Tidak mungkin' itu bentuk font.nya beda sendiri ya?

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